Motown to London Town

This book is creatively finished and we need it checked for errors in punctuation, including hyphenation, bracketing and continuing or partial quotes and speech (ending or starting in “…”) I have attached a sample chapter, which is similar to all the others. There are eleven chapters in total, comprising of 337 pages and 95,000 words. To confirm, it does NOT need editing, however if anything obviously wrong is found then let me know and I will give a bonus! I don't think this will be a too onerous job, nor should it take too long and I am in no hurry for it so it could be done a chapter at a time if that suited.