Spec Commercial Dialogue Polish

I already have a tightly boarded workplace-satire spot ready to shoot; what’s missing is the dialogue. I need roughly one to two pages of lines that keep the pacing we’ve set while sounding effortless in a modern corporate setting. Natural flow is my top priority, yet every line still has to carry subtext and land a witty, sharp beat without tipping into slapstick. Think passive-aggressive smiles in an open-plan office—polite on the surface, quietly savage underneath.

The visuals, scene order, and timing are locked, so you’ll be creating and polishing dialogue only.