Screenplay Review & Improvement Suggestions
Budget: $30 – $250 AUD
I have a completed, 150-page feature-length screenplay and now need a fresh, professional eye on it. I’m looking for thoughtful feedback that raises it to industry standard.
What I care about most—with equal weight—is how the dialogue lands, how tight and engaging the plot structure feels, and how fully the characters come to life on the page. Instead of rewriting scenes for me, please mark up the PDF or Final Draft file with margin notes, overall section notes, and a concise summary report that covers:
• Scene-by-scene observations on pacing, logic gaps, or missed emotional beats
• Dialogue notes—naturalism, subtext, unique voice, opportunities to trim or sharpen
• Character arcs—clarity of objectives, consistency, and growth throughout the story
• Structural commentary—act breaks, stakes escalation, and payoff effectiveness
• Market-level recommendations—tone, genre positioning, and fresh angles I could explore
I’m open to creative ideas and references from any genre you feel could elevate the material, so long as the core story remains mine. Final deliverables are the commented script (PDF or .fdx) and a 2-3 page report summarizing major recommendations and possible next steps.
If deep narrative analysis and constructive critique are your strengths, I’d love to collaborate.
What I care about most—with equal weight—is how the dialogue lands, how tight and engaging the plot structure feels, and how fully the characters come to life on the page. Instead of rewriting scenes for me, please mark up the PDF or Final Draft file with margin notes, overall section notes, and a concise summary report that covers:
• Scene-by-scene observations on pacing, logic gaps, or missed emotional beats
• Dialogue notes—naturalism, subtext, unique voice, opportunities to trim or sharpen
• Character arcs—clarity of objectives, consistency, and growth throughout the story
• Structural commentary—act breaks, stakes escalation, and payoff effectiveness
• Market-level recommendations—tone, genre positioning, and fresh angles I could explore
I’m open to creative ideas and references from any genre you feel could elevate the material, so long as the core story remains mine. Final deliverables are the commented script (PDF or .fdx) and a 2-3 page report summarizing major recommendations and possible next steps.
If deep narrative analysis and constructive critique are your strengths, I’d love to collaborate.