Proofread Romantic Short Story

I have a short romantic story—well under the typical magazine limit—that needs a final polish before submission. The plot is locked in, so the focus is on scrubbing out grammar slips, punctuation hiccups, and any sentences that trip up the flow. No house style to follow; standard fiction rules are perfect, and I’m happy to hear gentle suggestions if you spot a chance to make the narration or dialogue shine.

Please work in MS Word (Track Changes on) so I can review every tweak.

Deliverables
• Edited manuscript with all changes tracked
• Clean, publication-ready copy

If you notice any larger issues, just flag them in a comment, otherwise keep the edit light and precise.