Police Procedural Ending Development
Budget: €12 – €18 EUR
I have a first-draft police procedural and need fresh eyes on the final stretch of the story arc. I’ll share the closing chapters along with a brief synopsis of what comes before. Your job is to read that material and help me craft a satisfying, fully resolved ending.
What I’m after:
• Clear guidance on pacing the investigation through the final reveal.
• Suggestions for tightening clues so every loose end is addressed.
• Feedback on whether the resolution feels earned, believable, and true to genre expectations.
• Specific rewrite recommendations (scenes to add, reorder, or trim) so the plot pays off cleanly.
You may annotate directly in Word or Google Docs—whatever lets you leave tracked comments and scene-level notes. If you enjoy dissecting forensics, police procedure, and motive logic, this will be fun for both of us.
What I’m after:
• Clear guidance on pacing the investigation through the final reveal.
• Suggestions for tightening clues so every loose end is addressed.
• Feedback on whether the resolution feels earned, believable, and true to genre expectations.
• Specific rewrite recommendations (scenes to add, reorder, or trim) so the plot pays off cleanly.
You may annotate directly in Word or Google Docs—whatever lets you leave tracked comments and scene-level notes. If you enjoy dissecting forensics, police procedure, and motive logic, this will be fun for both of us.