Novel Editing

I have a 260 page, 47000 word novel that needs some editing WRT chronology (ensuring the timeline, dates and people's ages are aligned), word repetition in subsequent sentences (a pet peeve of mine), readability, etc. so I can either self publish or present to some potential publishers in Canada. I do not need someone to "improve" my storytelling. I have attached Chapter 4 of the novel for you to look at and decide if this is something you want to assist me with. Thank you - Harley