Kids Storybook Editing & Enhancement

I have a 20-page picture book aimed at curious preschoolers (ages 4-6) that already has text and draft illustrations in place. I now need a fresh set of creative eyes to make the whole package sparkle while keeping the overall feel playful and fun.

Here’s what I’m looking for:

• Precise grammar and punctuation polishing so every sentence sounds natural when read aloud.
• Light storyline tweaks that tighten the plot, strengthen character motivation, and boost page-turn suspense without lengthening the manuscript.
• Illustration improvements—this can be guidance on composition, colour choices, or small redraws—so the visuals reinforce the humour and energy of the words. (Artwork is in layered PSD files and Procreate; you may edit directly or supply clear art notes.)

When we’re done, I want a ready-to-print PDF plus separate high-resolution spreads (CMYK, 300 dpi) and a clean, proofread manuscript file. Please share one or two relevant samples—especially before-and-after pages—so I can see how you elevate both text and art.

If you’re excited about shaping a vibrant, giggle-worthy reading experience for little learners, let’s talk!