Crafting Emotional Hindi-Urdu Pop Lyrics

Hi Shanealam,
​That opening line is genuinely beautiful. "Tut kar sheesha aise bikhar jata hai..." has a really strong emotional hook that is perfect for a modern pop track.
​I would love to build the rest of the song around this. I write lyrics with the rhythm and vocalist in mind, so I will make sure the Hindi-Urdu phrasing is natural, easy to sing, and fits a standard 3-minute pop structure (verses, a catchy chorus using your line, and a bridge). Keeping it simple but emotionally deep is exactly my style, and I can easily blend in a few English words to keep the vibe modern.
​Just to give you a quick idea of my flow, here is a sample pre-chorus leading straight into your hook:
​Khaali khaali si raatein, khoyi khoyi si baatein,
Kyun lagta hai ruk sa gaya hai safar...
Tut kar sheesha aise bikhar jata hai,
Jaise kashti mein pada Dil NaJaR ata Hai.
​Let me know if you like this direction! I can get the full 24-28 lines drafted for you pretty quickly so we can lock in the perfect lyrics for the melody.
​Best,