The Last Cruise
Budget: $250 – $750 USD
A navy captain named Walter Freitag , 30 years advanced weapons development. Retires is easing into new routines in retirement. Some cognitive decline but not that pronounced. After talking to his dad over the last three years , Dick (Walters son) convinces Walter to take a cruise. However over the last year Walters cognitive decline is becoming more noticeable. Walt and Ruth Freitag and Dick and Sally take the cruise figuring it will be a good change. Melia the Chinese spy has been tracking Walter and the navys top secrect program from afar over the past ten years. She books the same trip to get close to Walter, the CIA is aware and assumes key positions on board.
A full three-act outline based on this ending The bridge takeover scene (this could be your signature chapter) A CIA debrief epilogue that hints at consequences Polishing the opening chapter to mirror the ending Making Walter’s naval command dialogue authentic and chilling Walter takes the ship to port so skillfully that the cruise line wants to hire him on the spot. The ship is secured with the moring lines and idle down. Walter and his son Dick are some of the last to leave the ship as all the passengers and a the new ly thrown together crew are leaving the ship. Once a familar port from where they started Walter hesitates on where they are. After some time he seams to come to his senses and Asks his son Dick "So Dick, when are we going on thar Cruise you keep telling me about?"
I do have an outline and have started a transcript for the book and have completed 13 chapters so far. I would like you to beta test it and help me develop it further . Eventually I would like to self publish it.
A full three-act outline based on this ending The bridge takeover scene (this could be your signature chapter) A CIA debrief epilogue that hints at consequences Polishing the opening chapter to mirror the ending Making Walter’s naval command dialogue authentic and chilling Walter takes the ship to port so skillfully that the cruise line wants to hire him on the spot. The ship is secured with the moring lines and idle down. Walter and his son Dick are some of the last to leave the ship as all the passengers and a the new ly thrown together crew are leaving the ship. Once a familar port from where they started Walter hesitates on where they are. After some time he seams to come to his senses and Asks his son Dick "So Dick, when are we going on thar Cruise you keep telling me about?"
I do have an outline and have started a transcript for the book and have completed 13 chapters so far. I would like you to beta test it and help me develop it further . Eventually I would like to self publish it.