Tweak my shipping copy

I'm not happy with the copy on my beta site. I feel like it doesn't tell a story and is too long and wordy. I need help pairing it down. The concept is simple, we teach small and medium size businesses how to ship. The pain is they don't know how to ship and we solve that by offering video lessons that teach how to ship. I need help tweaking and cutting down the copy to be focused, tell a story and convert people. www.shipbusters.com