Develop Banking employee CV content

Job ID: 31627772

Budget: $80 – $120 USD

Hello,

I am looking for professional writing to touch up a CV, no need to design the CV, just need to do the writing:
- Powerful convincing Portfolio "About"
- Experience: I have collected all the phrases and sentences from many related profession profiles, just need to modify in good phrasing, but not move away from banking language.

The focus of writing will be on the last two "job positions".
- Area Manager
- Head of Affluent

I you have any tips that will nail it as professional, just advice.

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These 3 paragraphs are information describing area manage "portfolio" = "About" paragraphs:
I need to edit to be a very best intro of 1 to 2 paragraphs max.
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Outstanding banking management professional with extra extensive experience developing high net worth client relationships and referral network. Deliver exceptional result through managerial skills. Expertise in cultivating and maintaining key relationships. Establish lasting banking relationship, and secure strategic alliance.

Experienced Area Manager with a demonstrated history of working in the banking industry. Skilled in Team Building, Marking, Market Research, Analytical Skills, Sales, Management Information Systems (MIS), and outstanding Interpersonal Skills. Strong sales and leadership professional graduated from HSBC Group Graduate Development Program (GGDP) United Kingdom.
A seasoned banker with 14+ years of solid experience in Retail Banking. I have a strong valuable and diversified network of clients covering High Net worth Individuals, Government entities and Corporates.
I’m a visionary leader enjoying sound reputation within banking industry seeking a challenge to drive realization of business targets while maintaining a firm focus on bottom line gains and distinguished team performance.