Indonesian Fiction Manuscript Editor Needed

I have completed the first draft of a fiction book written entirely in Indonesian and now want to elevate it before it goes to print. The core focus is on character development—refining motivations, deepening emotional arcs, and ensuring each major player feels authentic across the narrative.

Because I’m investing in a full-scale polish, I’d like you to look beyond character work and also flag issues in story flow, pacing, dialogue authenticity, and any grammar or punctuation slips you spot along the way. Your developmental feedback should be actionable and delivered inside the Word document via Track Changes and margin comments, followed by a clean master copy.

Scope of work
• In-depth character analysis with concrete rewrite suggestions.
• Chapter-by-chapter developmental notes on plot coherence, tension, and pacing.
• Line edits for style consistency, Indonesian grammar, and punctuation.
• A brief editorial report (2–3 pages) summarizing macro findings and next-step recommendations.

I’ll provide the full manuscript (≈90,000 words) in Word. Please confirm your experience editing Indonesian-language fiction, especially novels similar in length, and share two relevant samples or case studies. A professional yet approachable tone is essential, and confidentiality is non-negotiable—an NDA will be required before you receive the draft.