Formal Fiction Passage Polishing
Budget: $30 – $250 USD
I have a draft excerpt from my upcoming fiction title that now needs a professional pass. The story itself must stay intact, yet the language has to read with a refined, formal tone that remains inviting to a general audience. Your job is to smooth syntax, tighten pacing, elevate word choice where it lifts the narrative, and flag any continuity slips that might distract the reader.
Please preserve the original voice while correcting grammar, punctuation, and flow. I would also appreciate brief margin notes when you spot areas that could benefit from subtle re-structuring rather than outright cuts.
Deliverables:
• A version with Track Changes or equivalent markup showing every edit
• A clean, publication-ready version
Both files should return in the same document format as the draft (Word .docx).
Please preserve the original voice while correcting grammar, punctuation, and flow. I would also appreciate brief margin notes when you spot areas that could benefit from subtle re-structuring rather than outright cuts.
Deliverables:
• A version with Track Changes or equivalent markup showing every edit
• A clean, publication-ready version
Both files should return in the same document format as the draft (Word .docx).