Developmental Edit & Proofread Cozy Mystery

My 70,000-word cozy mystery is ready for a professional polish. I need a thorough developmental edit that digs into plot structure, character development, and pacing while preserving the light, humorous tone that defines the series. After the big-picture work is complete, I also want a meticulous proofread to catch any lingering typos, grammar slips, or punctuation issues so I can query agents with confidence.

Here’s what I’m expecting:
• An annotated manuscript with margin notes that point out plot weaknesses, flat or inconsistent character moments, and spots where the pacing drags or races.
• A concise editorial letter summarizing the main structural observations and offering clear, actionable revision suggestions.
• A clean, proofread version once revisions are incorporated, ready for a final read-through.

Experience with cozy mysteries or light-hearted crime fiction is a plus, and I value editors who can balance constructive critique with respect for voice. If you thrive on sharpening story arcs and tightening prose without dulling the charm, I’d love to work with you.