help willing and filing a affidavit

i am currently filing a claim against landlord and i require to write up an affidavit, i am claiming compensation for performing landlord obligations , financial compensation ,and rent abatements. also asking for my damage deposit and the key deposit. Therefore i need help writing an affidavit, or some sort of legal document to help me with my case i made an attempt at the affidavit to help better write what i am needing help with see attached file rough draft on affidavit