Polish Draft Company Wikipedia Page

I have a working draft of our company’s Wikipedia article that is currently sitting in my user sandbox. It already cites several reputable news articles, but before I submit it for review I want a seasoned Wikipedia contributor to give it a thorough polish. Your task is to:
Scope of work:
• Check the text line-by-line for neutrality, verifiability, and compliance with all current Wikipedia policies
• Remove or revise promotional, unsupported, or non-neutral language.
• Identify citation gaps and recommend stronger independent secondary sources where needed.
• Improve the structure so it follows Wikipedia style.
• Provide a clean publication-ready draft and a brief change log explaining the main edits.

I will share the sandbox link as soon as we start. Once your revision is complete and we are both satisfied, I will handle the final live submission unless you offer to do that as well. Looking forward to your expertise in getting this page accepted on the first pass.