Polish My Amazon Non-Fiction

My non-fiction title for young adults has just gone live on Amazon (link below). I want a fresh pair of eyes to run through the Kindle edition, flag every typo, grammar slip, and awkward sentence, and tell me—plainly—where the content could flow better or use an extra anecdote or explanation.

https://www.amazon.in/dp/B0FWFDYL8Y

How we’ll do this
• You’ll buy the e-book directly on Amazon so you experience it exactly as a reader does; forward the receipt and I’ll reimburse the full purchase price with your first milestone payment.
• Read the entire manuscript, marking issues with Track Changes or annotated Kindle notes—whichever is easier for you.
• Prepare a short summary that groups recurring problems (e.g., tense shifts, pacing dips) and suggests any new material or restructuring that would help young-adult readers stay engaged.

Deliverables
1. A copy of the manuscript with in-text corrections and comments.
2. A concise report (1–2 pages) highlighting overall clarity, flow, and recommended additions.
3. Confirmation of the purchase refund amount.

If you have solid editing experience, know the nuances of Kindle formatting, and enjoy guiding authors, I’m ready to start today.