Expert Feedback On One-Page Copy
Budget: $250 – $750 USD
I have drafted a single-page site whose sole purpose is to sell my copywriting services. The page presents a handful of text-based case studies and speaks directly to potential clients, so every headline, sentence, and call-to-action has to feel sharp, trustworthy, and conversion-focused.
What I need from you is an objective, professional critique. Read the page as if you were the ideal prospect, then tell me—clearly and concretely—what works, what distracts, and what must change. Please look at:
• Overall story flow and hierarchy
• Clarity, tone, and persuasiveness of the copy
• Placement and wording of calls-to-action
• Any UX or layout issue that blocks the message
Deliverables
1. A marked-up version of the page copy (Google Docs, Word track-changes, or a PDF with comments).
2. A short summary (1-2 pages) prioritizing your top recommendations so I can act on them immediately.
No design overhaul is required; this is strictly about tightening the words and their presentation. If you have experience with direct-response or B2B SaaS copy, that’s a bonus, but keen editorial judgment is what matters most.
What I need from you is an objective, professional critique. Read the page as if you were the ideal prospect, then tell me—clearly and concretely—what works, what distracts, and what must change. Please look at:
• Overall story flow and hierarchy
• Clarity, tone, and persuasiveness of the copy
• Placement and wording of calls-to-action
• Any UX or layout issue that blocks the message
Deliverables
1. A marked-up version of the page copy (Google Docs, Word track-changes, or a PDF with comments).
2. A short summary (1-2 pages) prioritizing your top recommendations so I can act on them immediately.
No design overhaul is required; this is strictly about tightening the words and their presentation. If you have experience with direct-response or B2B SaaS copy, that’s a bonus, but keen editorial judgment is what matters most.