I need a memoir
Budget: $30 – $250 USD
The project is just a life event that can be real or made up. The main objective of this memoir is to show not tell. The paper needs to be in MLA format and the length is 5 - 7 pages.
You tell the reader, "She gave me hope in myself again."
Instead, try to art it up: "My hands shook, as I looked at the glass of water before me. I couldn't look at Sarah, so I focused all of my intentions on that glass of water. Desparately thirsty from dehydration, I reached for it and would have knocked it over, had Sarah not reached simultaneously and steadied the glass for me. Finally, I met her soft blue eyes so filled with compassion for the first time. I felt my shoulders relax."
You tell the reader, "She gave me hope in myself again."
Instead, try to art it up: "My hands shook, as I looked at the glass of water before me. I couldn't look at Sarah, so I focused all of my intentions on that glass of water. Desparately thirsty from dehydration, I reached for it and would have knocked it over, had Sarah not reached simultaneously and steadied the glass for me. Finally, I met her soft blue eyes so filled with compassion for the first time. I felt my shoulders relax."