COMIC ARTIST, ONE TIME PROJECT THAT COULD BECOME LONG TERM. FIRST COMIC IS ALREADY MADE WE JUST NEED ADJUSTMENTS DONE ASAP
Budget: €10 – €30 EUR
FOR THE START WE DON'T NEED COMIC FROM SCRATCH AS THIS FIRST ONE IS ALREADY MADE BUT NEED CHANGES. I will attach 2 versions which we sent to our client, as our last designer dissapeared we will need someone to continue his work ASAP.
This is our clients feedback:
We've shared the comic with the team and received some feedback from them.
One high-level comment - the panels' text is missing, and it needs to be taken into consideration when you build the panels' composition.
In general, the green background version looks better in terms of the overall look (the way the campfire looks, the way the liquidity shatters, this kind of design has a lot of details you've put into each panel - which is great).
The grey background version looks better in terms of the superheroes' action poses (the first panel has the heroes in thought, with poses, and the last panel has very active heroes with vines and lightning, unlike the green version in which the heroes and rigid and look like they are practicing good posture in the first panel, and in the final panel almost all of them aren’t really doing anything but standing).
So what we would like to ask is some sort of hybrid version. Have the details and style of the green version, maybe with less distractions (less trees, for example) and with the poses and actionability of the superheroes of the grey version. I hope I was able to explain ourselves, if not - let me know! :)
Specifically about the superheroes, in all panels:
* Pinnacle hero (black) needs to seem more ambitious, almost cruel. Maybe a staff similar to https://forgottenrealms.fandom.com/wiki/Blackstaff_(staff)
* Academy hero (blue) - something like attached image on his face, but a little more shiny/more lights.
* Aegis male hero (grey) - a robe, something between a judge’s / angel’s robe
* Verdant male hero (green) - we should add “decorations of wreaths and flowers, emphasizing nature, community, and togetherness” to his outfit.
* Ignite female hero (orange) - holding a finger up (but arm still relaxed on lap/nearby) with a tiny flame above it like a candle.
Specifically in Panel 1 - see what I wrote above in general about the green/grey version (details vs. poses). This is a place where we want a hybrid version, to have both the details and the action poses as described above.
Specifically in Panel 2 - the liquidity shape should be Infinity, like in the grey version. The firecamp looks better in the green version (more detailed, more realistic).
Specifically in Panel 3 (superheroes argument) - we prefer the grey version of this in general. The storm is just a distraction, as if it’s attacking the heroes, so we can get rid of it.
Specifically in Panel 4 (holding the liquidity) - the liquidity shape should be Infinity, like in the grey version. It should be more clear that the heroes are fighting over it (maybe tug of war posture?)
Specifically in Panel 5 (liquidity explodes and shattered) - we want more liquid, please. The Liquidity floods out throughout the world. Maybe even show it running through the entire planet somehow from a look in space.
Specifically in Panel 6 - the grey version is better because everyone are in action, it looks that they are "fighting" over the same liquidity, etc.
I will attach image for Academy hero.(thumb media)
Let me know that I was able to explain myself. Thank you!
This is our clients feedback:
We've shared the comic with the team and received some feedback from them.
One high-level comment - the panels' text is missing, and it needs to be taken into consideration when you build the panels' composition.
In general, the green background version looks better in terms of the overall look (the way the campfire looks, the way the liquidity shatters, this kind of design has a lot of details you've put into each panel - which is great).
The grey background version looks better in terms of the superheroes' action poses (the first panel has the heroes in thought, with poses, and the last panel has very active heroes with vines and lightning, unlike the green version in which the heroes and rigid and look like they are practicing good posture in the first panel, and in the final panel almost all of them aren’t really doing anything but standing).
So what we would like to ask is some sort of hybrid version. Have the details and style of the green version, maybe with less distractions (less trees, for example) and with the poses and actionability of the superheroes of the grey version. I hope I was able to explain ourselves, if not - let me know! :)
Specifically about the superheroes, in all panels:
* Pinnacle hero (black) needs to seem more ambitious, almost cruel. Maybe a staff similar to https://forgottenrealms.fandom.com/wiki/Blackstaff_(staff)
* Academy hero (blue) - something like attached image on his face, but a little more shiny/more lights.
* Aegis male hero (grey) - a robe, something between a judge’s / angel’s robe
* Verdant male hero (green) - we should add “decorations of wreaths and flowers, emphasizing nature, community, and togetherness” to his outfit.
* Ignite female hero (orange) - holding a finger up (but arm still relaxed on lap/nearby) with a tiny flame above it like a candle.
Specifically in Panel 1 - see what I wrote above in general about the green/grey version (details vs. poses). This is a place where we want a hybrid version, to have both the details and the action poses as described above.
Specifically in Panel 2 - the liquidity shape should be Infinity, like in the grey version. The firecamp looks better in the green version (more detailed, more realistic).
Specifically in Panel 3 (superheroes argument) - we prefer the grey version of this in general. The storm is just a distraction, as if it’s attacking the heroes, so we can get rid of it.
Specifically in Panel 4 (holding the liquidity) - the liquidity shape should be Infinity, like in the grey version. It should be more clear that the heroes are fighting over it (maybe tug of war posture?)
Specifically in Panel 5 (liquidity explodes and shattered) - we want more liquid, please. The Liquidity floods out throughout the world. Maybe even show it running through the entire planet somehow from a look in space.
Specifically in Panel 6 - the grey version is better because everyone are in action, it looks that they are "fighting" over the same liquidity, etc.
I will attach image for Academy hero.(thumb media)
Let me know that I was able to explain myself. Thank you!