Corrections for business plan and financial plan

I need someone that can make professional corrections to the business plan that I created. I have attached the document with the comments our financial advisor made. I also attached the email sent by our financial advisor regarding the business plan.

Good evening,
I reviewed the Business Plan document prepared for Umuyenzi Ferme. Although it gives interesting information on the international market, and good description of the business, it has many shortcomings:
- The level is very low on the analytical level for the financial plan.
- It lacks a detail description of the investments needed to achieve those goals and how do we plan to finance it
- There should be a chapter were all the projects are consolidated into one operating plan for the farm
- The marketing plan needs to be reworked and more focused on umuyenzi ferme and not be general
- The executive summary is wrong, it’s just description of the company and its objectives contains nothing about the content of the document, no figure!
In a few words, it needs to be reworked.
I attached the document with my comments.