read and review a short story, point out flaws and suggest corrections

Project Description:
I am looking for an experienced freelancer who can read and review my fantasy short story. The story is approximately 21,000 words long, so far, and I would like the freelancer to focus on the plot and character development.
It's not finished and needs a lot of polish, but I am very interested in knowing if it looks like a good story to continue to work on, and any helpful advice would also be appreciated. Has some adult scenes but is not explicit, just mature.
Familiarity with anime and the isekai genre might be helpful in understanding what I am shooting for.

Skills and Experience:
- Excellent understanding of storytelling and character development
- Strong attention to detail
- Proficient in identifying flaws in a story and suggesting corrections
- Exceptional writing and grammar skills

Preferred Method of Feedback:
I would like the freelancer to provide feedback in a separate document, highlighting any flaws in the plot and character development and offering suggestions for improvement.