Zombie Story Plot Consistency Review
Budget: $10 – $300 USD
I’ve completed a full-length zombie-apocalypse manuscript that follows real families as they flee a farm, survive on the road, escape by boat, and ultimately seize control of a small, rag-tag town of survivors. Before I move into editing, I need a fresh set of eyes devoted solely to plot consistency.
The main objective is to trace the story’s progression scene by scene, flagging anything that clashes with previously established facts, motivations, or logic. I’m especially concerned about the final arc—the takeover of the small town—so double-checking the sequence of events, cause-and-effect, and overall believability there is critical.
Deliverable
• A concise report (or annotated manuscript) highlighting every inconsistency you spot, with a brief note on why it disrupts the narrative and a practical fix I can implement.
Acceptance Criteria
• All plot-related contradictions, gaps, or unexplained jumps are identified, particularly in the small-town arc.
• Feedback is clear, actionable, and tied to specific page or chapter references.
The draft is ready to send as a Word document, but I’m happy to work with Google Docs or any standard review tool you prefer. If a tight, logical storyline is your specialty, I’d love to hear your thoughts and get this tale airtight.
The main objective is to trace the story’s progression scene by scene, flagging anything that clashes with previously established facts, motivations, or logic. I’m especially concerned about the final arc—the takeover of the small town—so double-checking the sequence of events, cause-and-effect, and overall believability there is critical.
Deliverable
• A concise report (or annotated manuscript) highlighting every inconsistency you spot, with a brief note on why it disrupts the narrative and a practical fix I can implement.
Acceptance Criteria
• All plot-related contradictions, gaps, or unexplained jumps are identified, particularly in the small-town arc.
• Feedback is clear, actionable, and tied to specific page or chapter references.
The draft is ready to send as a Word document, but I’m happy to work with Google Docs or any standard review tool you prefer. If a tight, logical storyline is your specialty, I’d love to hear your thoughts and get this tale airtight.