Desiree - The day the men first came
Budget: £10 – £20 GBP
It's about a young lady called Desiree in Western Nigeria. It's set in the past though the particular era or time is not mentioned or fixed. Her village is pillaged by some people and her and her friends/family are enslaved. With their future uncertain, she has to deal with betrayal, love, friendship and a devastating events that almost destroys her. It's written in the voice of Desiree, though sometimes, she lends her voice to the other main characters who also have a chapter to narrate things from their point of view.
it's 181 pages long. I need someone to Beta read, to see how it comes across, as a reader, how do you feel about the characters, point out inaccuracies or things that need to be fleshed out/removed, some light editing but mostly constructive feedback.
it's 181 pages long. I need someone to Beta read, to see how it comes across, as a reader, how do you feel about the characters, point out inaccuracies or things that need to be fleshed out/removed, some light editing but mostly constructive feedback.