Finish this 20 second video
Budget: $299 – $300 USD
Narrative and pacing
Make the cat’s story clear and continuous: start with the cat whining for attention, then show the owner ignoring it, and later show the cat getting attention on her lap. The current cat motions feel inconsistent; tighten continuity and flow.
Clarify the mid-section flow: cat seeking attention → headlines overwhelm the owner → she downloads and uses the app → returns to engaging with the cat.
Visual fixes
Remove the “VO” logo at the bottom.
Fix the compositing where the overlayed screen covers the phone incorrectly. The screen UI should align to and track the phone and hand precisely.
Replace every garbled “flying article” box with readable, real-looking headlines. No tiny screenshots; use legible headline cards that fly by.
Keep the actor’s skin tone consistent between shots and across hands vs face.
Ensure smoother transitions between shots, especially the cat attention → app usage → back to cat sequence.
Audio and VO
Improve narration timing and overall audio flow.
Make the cat deliver the line “Get your attention back.”
Replace placeholder SFX; remove the repetitive “dinging” and use intentional, polished cues that support beats rather than distract.
App demo section
Show a clear, believable sequence of downloading and using the app.
Use representative screens rather than literal app screenshots if needed, but keep them readable and on-model.
Ensure the on-phone UI overlay matches finger interactions without artifacts.
Assets and inputs you can provide
I can send a shortlist of news headlines to feature in the flyover cards.
I have the script and individual audio files; “Get your attention back” likely needs a fresh take.
I can provide all source media but its just flat files
Make the cat’s story clear and continuous: start with the cat whining for attention, then show the owner ignoring it, and later show the cat getting attention on her lap. The current cat motions feel inconsistent; tighten continuity and flow.
Clarify the mid-section flow: cat seeking attention → headlines overwhelm the owner → she downloads and uses the app → returns to engaging with the cat.
Visual fixes
Remove the “VO” logo at the bottom.
Fix the compositing where the overlayed screen covers the phone incorrectly. The screen UI should align to and track the phone and hand precisely.
Replace every garbled “flying article” box with readable, real-looking headlines. No tiny screenshots; use legible headline cards that fly by.
Keep the actor’s skin tone consistent between shots and across hands vs face.
Ensure smoother transitions between shots, especially the cat attention → app usage → back to cat sequence.
Audio and VO
Improve narration timing and overall audio flow.
Make the cat deliver the line “Get your attention back.”
Replace placeholder SFX; remove the repetitive “dinging” and use intentional, polished cues that support beats rather than distract.
App demo section
Show a clear, believable sequence of downloading and using the app.
Use representative screens rather than literal app screenshots if needed, but keep them readable and on-model.
Ensure the on-phone UI overlay matches finger interactions without artifacts.
Assets and inputs you can provide
I can send a shortlist of news headlines to feature in the flyover cards.
I have the script and individual audio files; “Get your attention back” likely needs a fresh take.
I can provide all source media but its just flat files