Press release

Hey, I'm looking for a permanent content writer to write me a press release every week...for now, I want to test your skills before you start working. I will be sending you a press release that has already been written but it's not so good...I want to see what you are capable of doing to make it better(it must sound like a news story, and I would suggest that you some commentary, includes some insights/statistics about philanthropy in that region. Are you capable of doing this? Here is the link to the press release
Let me know if you can agree with what I'm offering..