Line of Thoughts (Screenplay writing)

hi, this is a very personal project and the story covers only the first act up until now. Will be needing professional help in filling out scene descriptions, dialogues, action scenes. A bit of creativity to add color to the story is most welcome. The first act will roughly be around 40 pages. Attached is a sample of 5 pages, do let me know if you're interested. Have a good day!