Bio for zillow -- 2

I need to write a bio for my zillow profile. I'm a new agent ... have been doing this for only one year. so I have no idea what to say on my bio. I have a background on sales. I also speak Portuguese & Spanish. born in Rio de Janeiro Brazil. came to united state in 2000. went to union county college for business. work as an agent at signature realty nj. its a very well known in union county, middle county & Essex county as a luxury homes and outstanding service. https://www.signaturerealtynj.com
I added an example from on of my colleges.