create an animated explainer video for bv cafe

I am looking for someone to create a comic book style story board and thought stills in this format may be as good if not better than the explainer video I have thought of. Attached is a storyboard I created (not very professional). If you can have a look and give me some feedback I would be grateful. I am wanting to use this as a social media introduction to the coffee brand story of blacc vanilla.