Lower AI Score in Manuscript

I have a 2,000-word original-research manuscript in the clinical-studies domain that currently shows an AI detection score of about 36 %. I need that score brought below 5 % without altering the scientific accuracy, data interpretation, or formal academic tone expected for a medical science submission.

You will receive the full document so you can see exactly where redundant phrasing, jargon overload, or overly complex sentence structures may be flagging the checker. The goal is a careful rewrite—more than simple paraphrasing—so the text reads naturally, retains all methodological and statistical detail, and passes standard AI-content detectors.

Deliverables
• Fully revised manuscript (Word format) with the AI score demonstrably under 5 %
• A version with tracked changes to show every adjustment
• A brief note (1–2 paragraphs) explaining the main strategies you used to mitigate detectable AI patterns

I will run the updated file through the same tool to confirm the result, so please be confident in your approach before delivery.