I have a YouTube ad that is not doing well and need someone to help me make it better.

I'm looking for a freelancer to help me elevate my YouTube ad. My ad currently has a duration of more than 1 minute, but the main issue seems to be that the script is weak. My ad's intended target audience is adults. I'm hoping to find someone who can help me brainstorm ideas, create a strong script and effective visuals, and aim my ad at the appropriate audience. Ad is 2 minutes and 28 seconds.