Live Logo Design Feedback -- 3

I’m crafting a modern logo for a physical-goods brand whose main goal is strong product-promotion appeal. My first draft will be ready within the next hour; while I work, I’d like a sharp designer’s eye on the process.

Here’s how it will flow: I’ll share my screen (Illustrator/Figma) so you can watch the concept take shape in real time. As you see the mark, color palette, and type choices evolve, I need quick, actionable suggestions on what to tweak, refine, add, or remove to keep the style clean, current, and memorable.

Deliverables (straight after the session)
• A concise written summary of all suggestions made during the session
• Any quick reference sketches or screenshots that clarify your ideas

Acceptance criteria
• Feedback addresses legibility, scalability, and brand differentiation
• Suggestions align with a modern aesthetic and the product-promotion objective
• All notes delivered within 15 minutes of session end

If you’re comfortable giving rapid, constructive critiques and can hop on a call immediately, let’s do this.