Pre-Submission Thesis Feedback Review -- 2
Budget: $250 – $750 USD
My doctoral thesis is ready in full draft and heading to Turnitin shortly. Before I submit, I want a seasoned academic eye to walk through the document and offer pointed, constructive comments—not a rewrite.
Key areas I need you to interrogate: the overall structure and logical flow, the strength of each argument and its supporting analysis, and the way my methodology, findings, and discussion align with the stated aims and objectives. I also need reassurance that the tone remains rigorously academic while feeling naturally written, free from the tell-tale patterns Turnitin flags as AI-generated. Sentence variation, transition quality, and clarity of expression are especially important.
Please work directly in the file (Word or PDF) using track-changes or in-text notes so I can see every suggestion. A brief summary sheet that highlights critical concerns and recommended fixes will complete the hand-back.
When you reply, include evidence of previous thesis critiques or similar scholarly reviews you have done so I can gauge fit. If you have a sample annotated chapter—or an excerpt that demonstrates your feedback style—attach it.
No paraphrasing or ghost-writing is required; thoughtful commentary is.
Key areas I need you to interrogate: the overall structure and logical flow, the strength of each argument and its supporting analysis, and the way my methodology, findings, and discussion align with the stated aims and objectives. I also need reassurance that the tone remains rigorously academic while feeling naturally written, free from the tell-tale patterns Turnitin flags as AI-generated. Sentence variation, transition quality, and clarity of expression are especially important.
Please work directly in the file (Word or PDF) using track-changes or in-text notes so I can see every suggestion. A brief summary sheet that highlights critical concerns and recommended fixes will complete the hand-back.
When you reply, include evidence of previous thesis critiques or similar scholarly reviews you have done so I can gauge fit. If you have a sample annotated chapter—or an excerpt that demonstrates your feedback style—attach it.
No paraphrasing or ghost-writing is required; thoughtful commentary is.