Grammar Revision and edits for short paper
Budget: $30 – $250 USD
I am looking for someone to help edit and revise this paper that i have attached below. You have to submit the text with clearly designated markups of three revisions and five edits.
Discuss the changes you made to the text by doing the following:
- Explain why each of the three marked revisions to the structure, content, and organization of the text were made.
- Explain why each of the five marked edits to the grammar, punctuation, and word choice of the text were made.
Provide feedback to the writer of the text by doing the following:
- Explain why the introduction is successful or unsuccessful at capturing your attention.
- Describe the greatest strength of the text.
- Explain whether the conclusion is successful or unsuccessful at bringing the text to a close.
- Describe the weakest part of the text
- Acknowledge sources, using in-text citations and references, for content that is quoted, paraphrased, or summarized.
- Demonstrate professional communication in the content and presentation of your submission.
Discuss the changes you made to the text by doing the following:
- Explain why each of the three marked revisions to the structure, content, and organization of the text were made.
- Explain why each of the five marked edits to the grammar, punctuation, and word choice of the text were made.
Provide feedback to the writer of the text by doing the following:
- Explain why the introduction is successful or unsuccessful at capturing your attention.
- Describe the greatest strength of the text.
- Explain whether the conclusion is successful or unsuccessful at bringing the text to a close.
- Describe the weakest part of the text
- Acknowledge sources, using in-text citations and references, for content that is quoted, paraphrased, or summarized.
- Demonstrate professional communication in the content and presentation of your submission.