IB German Essay Editing

Job ID: 40000404

Budget: €30 – €250 EUR

I have completed a German A Higher Level essay that explores die Machtverhältnisse zwischen zwei Personen in a novel. The core ideas are in place, but the piece still reads like a first draft. I now need a native-level editor who can elevate it to IB HL standards—tightening the argument, smoothing transitions, and polishing grammar, syntax, and academic register without diluting my personal voice.

What I will send you:
• my current 1,600-word essay in Word format
• the prompt and assessment criteria used by my teacher

What I need back:
• an annotated version with tracked changes, comments, and concrete suggestions on structure, thesis focus, and textual evidence
• a clean, ready-to-submit version that reflects those revisions

Please keep citations in MLA style, respect the word limit (1500 max), and highlight any sections where my analysis of the power dynamic feels under-developed. A quick turnaround (48 h) is ideal so I have time for a final read-through before submission.