Edit DBA Dissertation Chapters 4-5

Chapters 4 and 5 of my DBA dissertation have come back from my chair with a set of moderately detailed comments. I now need a meticulous rewrite that raises both chapters—and the accompanying reference list—to a publishable standard.

Your primary mission is to sharpen clarity and narrative flow while preserving every element of my original design and methodology. As you move through the manuscript, please standardise every in-text citation and reference entry to current APA guidelines, then address each chair comment point-by-point.

Because both chapters report and interpret quantitative findings, I am looking for someone who has already polished doctoral-level results and discussion sections. Mastery of Microsoft Word’s Track Changes is non-negotiable.

Deliverables
• Revised Chapter 4 and Chapter 5 files with Track Changes enabled
• Fully corrected in-text citations, corrected alphabetized reference list in APA format
• A concise response log that maps each chair comment to the change you made
• Turnitin report ( AI and Plagiarism)
• Submission ready

When you submit your bid, include a brief but detailed project proposal that shows how you will approach the edits, the tools or style guides you rely on, and the timeframe you need to complete the work. Feel free to reference any similar doctoral projects you have taken to publication readiness.

Once awarded, I will send you the current manuscript with all chair comments visible so you can begin immediately.