DBA Thesis Editing for Enhanced Clarity
Budget: $30 – $250 USD
I need a professional academic freelancer who can edit my DBA thesis titled "Knowledge Sharing as an Intermediary between the Impact of the Ability, Motivation and Opportunity Model (AMO) on the performance of Innovation and creativity (applicable to the Dubai Free Zones Council)
The thesis has returned with the following comments;
Evaluator’s conclusion:
1. The candidate is quite right when he states that innovation is central to determining a nation and that a nation should always position itself to be leader and not a follower.
2. The literature review is very good and the reference list is very current and comprehensive.
3. The hypothesis should be in chapter one not in chapter four.
4. There are no calculations in the text. There is just conclusions about the calculations, but we do not see any calculations in the text.
5. The paper needs to be restructured and have a separate chapter for conclusion and recommendations.
6. The topic of the thesis is relevant, and the data and literature used are very good. But the whole thesis feels like it is not finished. It is recommended that: the hypothesis be put in the chapters describing the research, and another separate chapter be included with conclusions and recommendations. The calculations used with quantitative data be put in the text. The chapter on quantitative analysis spends a lot of time discussing types of analysis, but very little time on providing the examples of calculations and description of the actual research conducted.
I referred to one of the college experts who wrote for me the following based on reading the DBA thesis and the initial evaluator's comments, and here's what I got:
1. Title of the Research
• Recommendation: Rewrite the research title to ensure clarity and precision. A revised title could be: "Examining Knowledge Sharing as a Mediator Between AMO Model Practices and Innovation and Creativity Outcomes in the Dubai Free Zones Council." This title reflects the research focus more accurately by emphasizing the mediator role of knowledge sharing and the specific context of the Dubai Free Zones Council.
2. Introduction to Chapters
• Recommendation: Instead of listing research contents at the beginning of each chapter, provide a brief introductory paragraph before each chapter. This introduction should outline the chapter's purpose and its relevance to the overall study. It will offer readers a clearer understanding of the chapter’s objectives and how it fits into the research framework.
3. Focus on Research Importance
• Recommendation: Refocus the "Importance of the Research" section to emphasize the theoretical significance of the study. This should detail how the research contributes to the existing body of knowledge, fills gaps in the literature, and advances theoretical understanding of the AMO model and knowledge sharing in the cultural sector. Separate the practical implications into a distinct section if necessary.
4. Research Aim and Objectives
• Recommendation: Clearly present the research aim as the primary goal or target of the study. This should be articulated in a way that aligns with the research problem and objectives, specifying what the research intends to achieve.
5. Inclusion of Hypotheses
• Recommendation: Add a section outlining the research hypotheses. These hypotheses should be derived from the literature review and theoretical framework, specifying expected relationships between the AMO model, knowledge sharing, and innovation and creativity.
6. Scientific Concepts and Definitions
• Recommendation: Relocate the definitions and explanations of scientific concepts to a separate section or appendix at the beginning of the research. This will ensure that readers have access to definitions without disrupting the flow of the main chapters.
Literature Review
7. Organization of Literature Review
• Recommendation: Structure the literature review by first summarizing and presenting studies relevant to the research topic. Follow this with a comparative analysis of the methodologies, results, and findings of different studies. This approach will help in identifying gaps in the current literature and justifying the need for your research.
Research Methodology
8. Methodology Rewriting
• Recommendation: Rewrite the Research Methodology chapter to exclude the theoretical framework and focus solely on the methodology. Clearly specify that the research adopts a mixed-methods approach, detailing both qualitative and quantitative methods used for data collection and analysis.
9. Organizing Findings and Recommendations
• Recommendation: Organize the findings into coherent paragraphs that clearly present the results of the research. Additionally, separate the recommendations and conclusions into distinct sections or bullet points for clarity. This structure will enhance readability and ensure that key insights and action points are easily identifiable.
Finally, based on the above, I need an academic expert in thesis writing to provide me with the final edited thesis and once we come to an agreement, I'll share the thesis to be finalized.
I'll pay 50% of the fees once thesis is received and the rest after being approved from the university which may take some time, not sure yet.
If you are ready, let's discuss.
The thesis has returned with the following comments;
Evaluator’s conclusion:
1. The candidate is quite right when he states that innovation is central to determining a nation and that a nation should always position itself to be leader and not a follower.
2. The literature review is very good and the reference list is very current and comprehensive.
3. The hypothesis should be in chapter one not in chapter four.
4. There are no calculations in the text. There is just conclusions about the calculations, but we do not see any calculations in the text.
5. The paper needs to be restructured and have a separate chapter for conclusion and recommendations.
6. The topic of the thesis is relevant, and the data and literature used are very good. But the whole thesis feels like it is not finished. It is recommended that: the hypothesis be put in the chapters describing the research, and another separate chapter be included with conclusions and recommendations. The calculations used with quantitative data be put in the text. The chapter on quantitative analysis spends a lot of time discussing types of analysis, but very little time on providing the examples of calculations and description of the actual research conducted.
I referred to one of the college experts who wrote for me the following based on reading the DBA thesis and the initial evaluator's comments, and here's what I got:
1. Title of the Research
• Recommendation: Rewrite the research title to ensure clarity and precision. A revised title could be: "Examining Knowledge Sharing as a Mediator Between AMO Model Practices and Innovation and Creativity Outcomes in the Dubai Free Zones Council." This title reflects the research focus more accurately by emphasizing the mediator role of knowledge sharing and the specific context of the Dubai Free Zones Council.
2. Introduction to Chapters
• Recommendation: Instead of listing research contents at the beginning of each chapter, provide a brief introductory paragraph before each chapter. This introduction should outline the chapter's purpose and its relevance to the overall study. It will offer readers a clearer understanding of the chapter’s objectives and how it fits into the research framework.
3. Focus on Research Importance
• Recommendation: Refocus the "Importance of the Research" section to emphasize the theoretical significance of the study. This should detail how the research contributes to the existing body of knowledge, fills gaps in the literature, and advances theoretical understanding of the AMO model and knowledge sharing in the cultural sector. Separate the practical implications into a distinct section if necessary.
4. Research Aim and Objectives
• Recommendation: Clearly present the research aim as the primary goal or target of the study. This should be articulated in a way that aligns with the research problem and objectives, specifying what the research intends to achieve.
5. Inclusion of Hypotheses
• Recommendation: Add a section outlining the research hypotheses. These hypotheses should be derived from the literature review and theoretical framework, specifying expected relationships between the AMO model, knowledge sharing, and innovation and creativity.
6. Scientific Concepts and Definitions
• Recommendation: Relocate the definitions and explanations of scientific concepts to a separate section or appendix at the beginning of the research. This will ensure that readers have access to definitions without disrupting the flow of the main chapters.
Literature Review
7. Organization of Literature Review
• Recommendation: Structure the literature review by first summarizing and presenting studies relevant to the research topic. Follow this with a comparative analysis of the methodologies, results, and findings of different studies. This approach will help in identifying gaps in the current literature and justifying the need for your research.
Research Methodology
8. Methodology Rewriting
• Recommendation: Rewrite the Research Methodology chapter to exclude the theoretical framework and focus solely on the methodology. Clearly specify that the research adopts a mixed-methods approach, detailing both qualitative and quantitative methods used for data collection and analysis.
9. Organizing Findings and Recommendations
• Recommendation: Organize the findings into coherent paragraphs that clearly present the results of the research. Additionally, separate the recommendations and conclusions into distinct sections or bullet points for clarity. This structure will enhance readability and ensure that key insights and action points are easily identifiable.
Finally, based on the above, I need an academic expert in thesis writing to provide me with the final edited thesis and once we come to an agreement, I'll share the thesis to be finalized.
I'll pay 50% of the fees once thesis is received and the rest after being approved from the university which may take some time, not sure yet.
If you are ready, let's discuss.