Academic Paper Readability Rewrite

I have an academic paper that says what it needs to say, but much of the language is dense and the key ideas feel buried. Your task is to reword and rephrase the manuscript so it reads smoothly while still sounding scholarly. The priority is to clarify complex concepts; every technical point must remain accurate, just easier for a reader to grasp on the first pass.

I do not need the text shortened or simplified into lay terms—only refined so sentences flow logically and jargon is explained or re-framed where appropriate. Citations, data, tables, and overall structure should stay exactly as they are.

Deliverables
• A Word file with track-changes showing every revision
• A clean copy ready for submission

I will supply the full draft once we agree to proceed and can answer any content-specific questions that arise during the edit.