Academic Article Proofreading

Job ID: 40159306

Budget: $30 – $250 USD

Need a paper reviewed and proofread and edited

I got these comments from the reviewer

The manuscript demonstrates an understanding of the technical language but needs substantial attention to clarity, grammar, and style. There are frequent issues with sentence structure, awkward or non-standard phrasing, inconsistent terminology, and at times unclear pronoun references. The narrative is repetitive in places and could be made more concise and precise. Substantial English language editing is recommended to improve flow, reduce redundancy, and enhance academic tone.

The paper communicates its ideas in a broadly understandable manner; however, the text is verbose in places, with occasional awkward phrasing, inconsistent use of terminology, and overextended sentences, which reduce clarity and impede smooth readability for a scholarly audience.

It is roughly 5800 words without References. Highlighted areas need to stay highlighted because they want to track what was changed.