Screenplay editing and improving -- 2

1. I wrote a screenplay titled "Time of Your Life". It is meant to be a dark comedy.
2. I then paid for a review, which review has brief and detailed notes.
3. You are required to
(a) Review the original screenplay, and the review notes.
(b) You then improve the screenplay based on the review notes, and your own experience and expertise. However, where you differ with the (original) review notes please say so and why (therefore) you have not incorporated that part of the review into the improvement of the screenplay.
(c) Submit your version (draft 2) of the improved screenplay.
(d) We then have a 45min discussion over Zoom/Teams with my feedback/concerns and how they can be addresses. I may send a summary/minutes of our meeting.
(e) You then take that into account these to do a final (draft 2) of your revised screenplay.
4. Document details
(a) Original screenplay, PDF: 112 pages
(b) Summary of main characters, MS Word: 7 pages
(c) Executive summary of review notes, PDF: 9 pages
(d) In-line notes: they are within the original screenplay