I Need Video Editor - 2

Job ID: 37131972

Budget: $30 – $250 USD

Following video is edited in Adobe Premiere pro but I am not satisfied with this.
https://youtu.be/lG8I4t5hcZw
Please watch full video and suggest which area need improvement regarding graphics and voice over quality.
Waiting for suggestions.
Regards

Related categories: Video Services After Effects Video Production Video Editing Adobe Premiere Pro